Thursday, 5 March 2009

Feedback for my final project

Front Cover - the front cover is mainly ok but the text at the bottom could be altered to make it more clear as well as altering the stories so that the text is all the same size. If you could do something to make them stand out more that would make it look more professional. I like the main image as it's a good size.

Contents Page - I like how it's laid out but the space could be used better as it seems a bit empty by maybe adding some images also the "pages 2 and 3" isn't very clear so if that could be altered that would improve it.

Double Page Spread - This is a place for a lot of improvement. The images in the centre may not be visible in reality due to the fold in the page so you need to move where your images are. Also you need to make sure that all the sub headings are the same size so that the magazine looks more professional. However I like the colour scheme and the use of the arrows on the pages.

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